Attendees

Connor Brown

Benjamin Puninske

Team Reviews and Revises Step One and 

Step One

We have decided to go with the proposal report style. Our report's main goal is to be persuasive.  "In a proposal, you make an offer and try persuade your reads to accept it" (Anderson pg 554). The main feature of a proposal is creating a report that convinces our audience to enact the final goal of the report. When reading a report, our audience will have certain questions that need to be answered. This is addressed in the superstructure of the proposal.

Problem interested addressing: We need to convince Golf courses need to adopt our "Golfler" system as their primary platform for retail data collection. 

Ben: Do we have to frame this as a sales pitch? Or are we solving the problem of the golf course's problems?

We need to research each golf course specially an tailor a proposal. 

Conor: I think we should research golf courses on by "type". Public clubs, Private clubs, affluent clubs. Chose a category before writing a proposal for that club/course.

No ethic questions. No feasibility test.

Sustainability is an issue of server space, but should not effect our proposal writing as it is a long term program.  We could use sustainability as a persuasive point, cite app updates and such. 

Effect marketing is the brunt of the work we are doing.

We shall return to this paragraph at our next meeting. We will ask Amer shall rewrite it before the next meeting.

Step Two 

Our Step three, at the moment, is in poor condition.  

Ben will construct a better version before our meeting Thursday.

For typical proposal questions, see Anderson 556 - 557.

They'll use it to base there decision on accepting out solution or not.

We plan on being persuasive using numbers, data, and pricing.

Connor: "Numbers talk".

Audience profile could use some shaping. Not only the golf course owners, the users of the apps.

Connor will write a small audience paragraph. 

Context is based and is different for each of the research categories.