Reviewers:
- Ryan Thai
- Owen Pierce
- Mariela Sanchez
Task 1: Cover Letter
Pros:
- Structurally sound
- Everything flowed neatly. Well organized.
- Very straight to the point
- Great use of specific related work experience on paragraph 3.
Cons:
- Include "Human Resources" department instead of "Internship Department".
- Most papers go through the Human Resource department
- A couple grammatical errors
- Read it aloud to oneself and errors become noticeable.
- Please add "Enclosure: Resume" on the bottom
- Especially when it comes to job career interviews. Many will want to see two or more papers at hand.
Task 2: Resume
Pros:
- Good use of white space to spread information evenly
Cons:
- A bit confusing at first glance. A bit disorganized when seeing too many Experience subheadings.
- Gather the the work experience together
- One "experience" heading and all different job experiences underneath
- Company name then job description underneath
- Keep it to one full page
- "Waste of Space" isn't good. Readers may have short attention spans only focusing on the first major page.
- Other readers may look at the large empty space and conclude that the applicant has very few to offer to the job.
- Put academic and professional into one category : Education
- Put more key points underneath and achievements
- Don't use header format for contact information
- Readers will already know your contact information after looking the first page
Task 3 : Professional Webpage
Pros:
- The contact information is well organized
- Adding an email reply helps feedback without having them call you
Cons:
- Include the title of the work projects and not just project 1, project 2, project 3
- Too much white space in the Resume and Cover letter page
- Add a few pictures to make it stand out
- Add an "About Me" page
- Let the readers know about you a bit more
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