Steve Project 1 Critique


First impression strengths:  

 

 

 

First impression weaknesses:   

 

         

How can the cover letter be improved?

 

  1. Be more specific in describing what you could do for the company.
  2.  You did a great job listing your courses and how they helped you develop skills for the company, but you should also list some traits about yourself  and how you will work with other employees.  
  3. More active verbs.  

 

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