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PHASE 1 - Cover Letter

• Need one 

PHASE 2 - Resume 

• Experience in a multitude of computer languages- Good Stuff
• Doesn't show personal qualities anywhere- toss it in somewhere (education & related experience)
• Music and boxing for supporting abilities in computer science.
• Also has programming languages 
• Doesn't show people skills, such as leader or works well by self, self driven, or team oriented.
• Add redundancy such as, Microsoft PowerPoint slideshow or Microsoft Excel spreadsheet program.
• We think the (under construction) is unnecessary, even it is true. Avoid filler.  
• Like the B.S in Computer Science-relevant
• Exploit that BA in psych 
• Use verbs to make yourself look good- exaggerate subtlely

PHASE 3 -  Webpage 

• Boringly basic webpage- but obviously needs work
• Header should be made more prominent so people scroll past it
• Add links to organizations
• Don't like the gray text on white background- experiment with colors
• Better resume than wiki's- has more organization and info
• Website needs work- but looks fresh 
• If the projects aren't yours- take them out 

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